Friday 23 March 2012

First draft and feedback


Above is the feedback I got for my first draft. Most of the feedback was good but just a few negative feedback comments:
  • "It looks gd. and like the pictures BUT the only think dont like is the colours. think the red and blue clash"
  • "Not feeling the colour scheme... Loving the title... "Bounce"... . Xx"
After reading this feedback I decided to change the:
  • Images
  • Colour scheme
  • Contents page and front cover
  • Background on my contents page
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